Toward Counternarratives of Critical Thinking and Writing

J. Hayes, Paul Pasquaretta, G. Pritchett
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This next year is the seventieth anniversary of the publication of Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man, an occasion that has prompted us, as editors, to reread the novel as a text very much about writing pedagogy and history. Editing is, of course, a pedagogical process in guiding a manuscript through revisions to the endpoint of publication, which inscribes the text in history while conferring upon its author the cultural capital that facilitates future publications. Because history in this way shapes and is shaped by textual production, we take this moment to commemorate the publication of Ellison’s novel by reflecting on the power we hold as editors and considering what we might learn from Invisible Man about our own editorial praxis. The novel depicts a power structure that has created a master narrative through what Slevin (2001) would call a “teleology of improvement,” in which students are defined as lacking the discourse that will award them the cultural capital necessary for upward mobility in “the spiral of history” (Ellison, 1972, p. 6). Students “improve” by suppressing their home discourses as they learn how to reproduce a dominant one. The result is a symbolic violence, which the novel’s unnamed narrator eventually discovers. Having excelled as a writer and speaker by repeating the dominant discourse learned in school and college and through social activism, he finds that his efforts have only perpetuated a power structure that denies him racial equality and that his upward mobility has really been an endless cycle of manipulation: “Beware of those who speak of the spiral of history; they are preparing a boomerang. Keep a steel helmet handy” (p. 6). This symbolic violence renders the narrator invisible. Repeatedly knocked downward and backward in the spiral, he comes to identify with the “I” of the song “What Did I Do to Be so Black and Blue?” In the title’s reference to bruising as the effect of physical punishment, the colors black and blue mark the skin as universal, as a synecdoche for humankind. But when the “I” is embodied by Louis Armstrong through his performance of the song, “black” is reassigned to the color of skin itself, as a synecdoche for a particular race, and the physical effect of punishment becomes symbolic: being black and downcast is punishment the narrator will inevitably suffer, regardless of what he does or does not do. However, the “I” also exists, therefore, prior to race, which is a “construction of their inner eyes” (p. 3), making him invisible to the power structure. Living apart from the spiral of history, he steals electricity from Monopolated Light & Power to play on a phonograph “What Did I Do to Be so Black and Blue?” Between the song’s notations, its inscription in history, he explores space and time:
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明年是拉尔夫·埃里森的《看不见的人》出版70周年,这一时刻促使我们,作为编辑,重新阅读这本小说,主要是关于写作教育学和历史的。编辑,当然,是一个教学过程,引导手稿通过修订到出版的终点,这将文本铭刻在历史上,同时赋予其作者文化资本,以促进未来的出版。因为历史以这种方式塑造了文本生产,也被文本生产所塑造,所以我们利用这一时刻来纪念埃里森小说的出版,反思我们作为编辑所拥有的权力,并考虑我们可以从“看不见的人”身上学到什么关于我们自己的编辑实践。小说描绘了一种权力结构,这种权力结构通过斯莱文(2001)所说的“改善的目的论”创造了一种主要叙事,在这种叙事中,学生被定义为缺乏话语,这种话语将奖励他们在“历史的螺旋”中向上流动所必需的文化资本(埃里森,1972,第6页)。学生在学习如何复制主导话语时,通过压制他们的家庭话语来“提高”。结果是一种象征性的暴力,小说的无名叙述者最终发现了这一点。作为一名作家和演说家,他通过重复在学校和大学以及通过社会活动学到的主流话语而表现出色,他发现他的努力只会使一种权力结构永久化,这种结构否认了他的种族平等,他的向上流动实际上是一个无休止的操纵循环:“小心那些谈论历史螺旋的人;他们正在准备回旋镖。随身带着钢盔”(第6页)。这种象征性的暴力使叙述者隐形。在不断地向下和向后的螺旋打击中,他开始认同歌曲“我做了什么让我如此青一块紫一块?”在标题中提到瘀伤是体罚的结果,黑色和蓝色标志着皮肤是普遍的,是人类的喻喻。但当“我”被路易斯·阿姆斯特朗(Louis Armstrong)通过这首歌的表演体现出来时,“黑”被重新分配到皮肤本身的颜色,作为一个特定种族的喻喻,惩罚的身体效果变得具有象征意义:作为黑人和沮丧的人是对叙述者的惩罚,无论他做什么或不做什么,他都将不可避免地遭受惩罚。然而,“我”也因此先于种族而存在,这是一种“他们内心眼睛的建构”(p. 3),使他对权力结构不可见。远离历史的漩涡,他从垄断光和电力公司偷电,用留声机播放“我做了什么让自己遍体鳞伤?”在这首歌的音符和它在历史上的铭文之间,他探索了空间和时间:
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