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摘要
本研究探讨了采用不同同伴反馈模式的英语学生在合作写作中的写作表现。来自中国两个便利样本班的53名大二学生自愿参与了这项准实验研究。随机分为实验组(EG)和对照组(CG),实验组使用LMS平台进行异步在线同伴纠错,对照组使用纸质同伴纠错。独立t检验结果显示,EG组学生的后测写作成绩显著优于CG组学生(t = 2.10, p = 0.044)。EG组的学生在修改和逻辑结构方面的反馈意见明显多于CG组的学生。另一方面,CG组的学生在纠正语法错误上比EG组的学生付出了更多的局部评论。作者的结论是,英语学习者可以从收到以修改为导向的评论中受益,从而提高写作质量。因此,教师应该为学生提供多种选择,以便在英语课堂上实施在线同伴反馈。本研究的局限性,并提出进一步在其他学科重复研究的建议。
Effects of Paper-based and Online Asynchronous Corrective Feedback on EFL Writing
This study explored EFL students’ writing performance of using different peer feedback modes in collaborative essay writing. A total of 53 sophomores from two convenience sample classes in China volunteered to participate in this quasi-experimental study. They were randomly assigned to the experimental group (EG), applying asynchronous online peer correction using an LMS platform, and the control group (CG), utilizing paper-based peer correction. Results from an independent t-test showed that students in the EG significantly outperformed those in the CG in the posttest writing performance (t = 2.10, p = 0.044). Students in the EG provide significantly more global peer feedback comments on revising and logical structures than those in the CG. On the other hand, students in the CG paid much more local comments on correcting grammatical errors than those in the EG. The authors concluded that EFL learners can benefit from receiving revision-oriented comments which led to better writing quality. Therefore, teachers should provide students with a variety of options for implementing online peer feedback in EFL classes. The limitations of this study and suggestions for further replications in other subjects are provided.