Damar Isti Pratiwi, Armyta Puspitasari, Ainun Fikria
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While writing has evolved away from the conventional method of using pens and paper in favor of digital tools (Li et al., 2019), English teachers continue to face difficulties in teaching writing. This study shows how mind-mapping and the program, Writeabout, can be merged for online writing classes in English for Specific Purposes (ESP) clasrooms. It reports on a classroom-based research with a qualitative research design which includes class observations and essay analysis of first-year undergraduate students enrolled in the Railway Mechanical Technology program in Indonesia during the academic year 2020/2021. The analysis of students’ essays via TOEIC-adopted writing criteria showed that the students lacked competence in vocabulary (range: 2-5), grammar (range: 2-5), and sentence quality (range: 2-5). However, their text organization skills were a bit higher (range: 3-7), which was likely due to the course instructions’s incorporation of mind-mapping techniques. The findings revealed that incorporating the mind-mapping technique and the Writeabout application into online writing lessons can have a positive effect on students’ writing.
虽然写作已经从使用笔和纸的传统方法演变为使用数字工具(Li et al., 2019),但英语教师在写作教学中仍然面临困难。这项研究表明,思维导图和Writeabout程序可以合并到专门用途英语(ESP)课堂的在线写作课程中。它报告了一项基于课堂的研究,采用定性研究设计,包括课堂观察和文章分析,研究对象是2020/2021学年印度尼西亚铁路机械技术专业的一年级本科生。根据托业考试的写作标准对学生的作文进行分析,学生在词汇(范围:2-5)、语法(范围:2-5)和句子质量(范围:2-5)方面的能力不足。然而,他们的文本组织能力略高(范围:3-7),这可能是由于课程指导结合了思维导图技术。研究结果表明,将思维导图技术和Writeabout应用程序结合到在线写作课程中,可以对学生的写作产生积极影响。