“对不起,我英语不好”:日本第二语言学生面对面和匿名评议方式下的书面同伴反馈

IF 1.7 Q2 EDUCATION & EDUCATIONAL RESEARCH Journal of Writing Research Pub Date : 2023-04-09 DOI:10.17239/jowr-2023.15.02.02
Sugene Kim
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为了验证和扩展先前的研究,即来自集体主义亚洲文化的第二语言学生由于希望保持群体凝聚力而不愿批评他人的工作,本研究探讨了匿名是否有助于改善他们所谓的不愿给予负面反馈。19名日本第二语言学生以面对面和匿名的方式对论文进行评议,并根据消极的类型、程度和实施的缓解策略对他们的反馈意见进行比较分析。结果表明,日本第二语言学生无论采用何种同伴评议方式,都采取了极其礼貌的人际修辞姿态。批评几乎总是采取一种缓和的形式,在一条评论中使用多种缓和策略或词汇模糊解释并不罕见。对歧义或请求进行回避的语用能力与使用的语言或审稿人的第二语言熟练程度无关。这些观察结果表明,缓解手段的使用是从学习者的母语技能中转移过来的,这表明文化属性可能不是影响亚洲学生在同伴互动中不愿提供负面反馈的主要因素。
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“Sorry, I don’t good English”: Japanese L2 students’ written peer feedback in the face-to-face and anonymous review modes
To verify and extend the previous research claim that L2 students from collectivistic Asian cultures are resistant to criticizing others’ work due to a desire to preserve group cohesion, this study explored whether anonymity helps ameliorate their alleged reluctance to give negative feedback. Nineteen Japanese L2 students reviewed essays in the face-to-face and anonymous modes, and their feedback comments were comparatively analyzed according to the types, levels of negativity, and mitigation strategies implemented. The results showed that Japanese L2 students adopt an extremely polite interpersonal rhetorical stance regardless of the peer review mode. Criticism almost always assumes a mitigated form, and it is not uncommon to employ multiple mitigation strategies or lexical hedges in a single comment. The pragmatic competence with respect to hedging disagreement or requests did not correlate with the language used or the reviewer’s L2 proficiency. These observations suggest that the use of mitigating devices is transferred from learners’ L1 repertoire, indicating that cultural attributes might not be a major factor influencing Asian students’ reluctance to provide negative feedback in peer interactions.
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Journal of Writing Research
Journal of Writing Research EDUCATION & EDUCATIONAL RESEARCH-
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40 weeks
期刊介绍: The Journal of Writing Research is an international peer reviewed journal that publishes high quality theoretical, empirical, and review papers covering the broad spectrum of writing research. The Journal primarily publishes papers that describe scientific studies of the processes by which writing is produced or the means by which writing can be effectively taught. The journal is inherently cross-disciplinary, publishing original research in the different domains of writing research. The Journal of Writing Research is an open access journal (no reader fee - no author fee).
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